Wednesday 23 October 2019

Character Description

Last week me made character description. Because we are learning to work using Show don't Tell. Can you guess my character?

Who am i? She’s such a cute little girl who wears such an adorable rose red coloured hood, Which unfortunately she ruins every time she goes to visit her old wrinkly grandma. 

She acts like what looks like, a sweet charming girl who skips EVERYWHERE she goes. And when she goes to visit her grandma she always brings fresh bread in a small straw basket. 

And after being eaten by her grandma (actually a big bad wolf) A brave woodcutter comes and saves little red and her grandmother grandma. And then they all live happily ever after.  

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1 comment:

  1. Unknown31 October 2019 at 16:38

    Hello Digby it's Abbie from Grey Main school.
    I really like your post about show not tell I did it last year!
    I am guessing your character is little red riding hood.
    Next time you could put a close up of her face or something.
    Kai Pai,
    form Abbie.

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