Thursday, 18 October 2018

Roll a Story

In Room 25 we have been learning how to write narratives and what to include a narrative.
Miss Mills made up characters, settings and problems. We had to roll a die and what ever we rolled there would be a character, setting or a problems we would have to use for or story. This is what I got.

Character: Grumpy bear
Setting: At a magical castle
Problem: Found an unlucky penny

This is my story.

On a dark wet day at Grizzly castle Grumpy bear was in a deep sleep when he heard the most deafening sound in the world. Thunder.
All of a sudden he waved his feet around trying to kick his duvet of his warm fury body once he'ed managed to get the duvet off he ran outside to see what the noise was.
It was thunder and rain, he'ed forgotten his umbrella so he quickly huddled under Bearina's umbrella.

He watched the king and one of his knights talk about a lucky penny. The penny did the opposite of what the bear holding the penny wished for. Then one of the villagers shouted out "Say something bad and see what happens." so then he said "I wish, I was the poorest king in the universe, guess what happend, his gold necklace disappeared and and his cloths turned brown...

I will add a picture later.

5 comments:

  1. Hi I am Licha from Room 8, I liked your story it is cool, I would like to see the picture. if you would like to see my blog the address is - http://odsnitlichac.blogspot.co.nz

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  2. Hi Licha, thanks for your comment. I will draw the picture tomorrow and then post it on my blog.
    Blog you later Digby

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  3. Kia Ora, my name is Mason and I'm from Room 24 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your writing. I liked how you introduced your characters before beginning to write. i have done roll a story to i enjoyed it did you enjoy it. you should check out my blog https://odsmasonp.blogspot.com/ blog ya later, Digby

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  4. Kia Ora, my name is Amani and I’m from Room 7 at Owairaka District School. I really liked your blog post about narrative writing I liked your story too.

    Thanks for sharing your learning. You should check out my blog (odsamaniw.blogspot.co.nz/)

    Blog you later,
    Amani

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  5. Hi Amani. Thanks for commenting on my blog I really appreciate it. I will be sure to check out your blog and hopefully post a comment.

    Blog you later
    Digby

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